The Phoenix (thepheenixeyri) wrote,
The Phoenix

Mor nanowrimo

So now that I'm flying, I'm wondering howI can get one of my characters to become angsty.

I've never written an angry type scene before, nor have I written a battle scene. OK, not a true battle scene anyway. I need descriptions, please. The angry words I can do, but the gestures, the facial expressions, the eye color changes, heeelp!! And with the battle scenes, it's with swords, how does that work? What do I need to consider when writing it?

Morgan tells me he is going to get "roarin' fumin' mad" but I'm not sure how to pull stuff like this off.

Oh, and if anyone could hand me samples of an Irish or Scottish brogue (hint, hint to those who love the bagpipes, LOL), it would be appreciated. Both Morgan and Ryliegh will be using it, and I didn't want to mess it up, so I didn't put it in the story yet. I guess I'm odd like that.

The Phoenix
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